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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-10 18:55:34 | The Love Boat | You are an excellent writer but need some more courses. Go back to your counselor and let him/her edit some of ou works. They could recommend some useful courses. Continue writing for you have wonderful talen!! I thoroughly enjoyed all of your stories!! Rex |
| 2004-05-24 23:55:54 | The Love Boat | hot hot hot wet wet wet |
| 2004-07-04 20:01:24 | The Love Boat | its would have beeb a littke better if you conyinued the shower!!!!! |
| 2004-12-08 21:36:39 | The Love Boat | I'm sure I have read some of your stories elsewhere. Be wary of apostrophes and the need thereof. I have trouble with "dove" as the past tense of "dive". To me it should be "dived" "Love me like we were in love and there's no tomorrow." "That's the only way to make love" I do wish I could do that! |
| 2005-05-24 15:53:50 | The Love Boat | it was really good... jsut make sure you use the right names... sometimes you mixed them up. |