| 2007-01-26 09:01:17 |
Who's your master!!
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Terrible grammer/spelling. |
| 2007-01-26 09:09:14 |
Who's your master!!
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Fair story but not unique. Girl being submissive totally is not best at least to me. Better to extend the teasing with his cock hard and stiff penetrating her pussy in states with short thrusts starting with the head first and slowly progressing inch by inch over an extended period of time until the cock is penetrated to the hilt up to the balls and held for 60 seconds at least. She would revel in this pleasure. |
| 2007-01-26 09:23:26 |
Who's your master!!
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huh? i didnt make that many mistakes lol |
| 2007-01-26 09:28:50 |
Who's your master!!
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What kind of hotel would have Room 475 on the eighth floor? At that point, the writer lost me. Fiction or not, that is a big mistake. |
| 2007-01-26 09:31:23 |
Who's your master!!
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AWESOME STORY!!!! loved it but now ive got a stiff one why dont you come down here b my little slave forget d.p.m gett ready for t.d.r im a real man i can tell my real name tom druhard ronalds ill be wating at the tipton lol |