| 2007-05-10 23:44:47 |
Family's unwanted sexual awaking
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stupid fucking idea, waste of my time, the character changes were too sudden and ample time was not allowed for the plot to develope and to show the true feelings of each individual, you suck as a writer and should probably hang up the keyboard |
| 2007-05-12 21:36:04 |
Family's unwanted sexual awaking
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while it turns me on thinking about being able to make people go crazy like that, you sure suck as a writer :P you should have infected one with your juice stuff, then slowly seduce the others one by one, with michelle in fear of you constantly, then she should be twisted into joining while still in fear and hate. (make sure not to do this with any of the others because then its repeptitive, and its hard to have a good story with repitition) also, you already missed your chance to do that :P |
| 2007-06-27 09:01:33 |
Family's unwanted sexual awaking
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gayest story ever |
| 2007-07-29 16:03:41 |
Family's unwanted sexual awaking
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please hurry up with chapter 2 |
| 2007-08-01 01:29:28 |
Family's unwanted sexual awaking
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FAIL |