| 2007-01-28 09:47:32 |
Todd and Cindy
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the reading is the perfect build up to a "perfect" story. keep up the good work!! i hope you plan on continueing with this. |
| 2007-01-28 22:46:46 |
Todd and Cindy
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I agree with Mark. Gotta build the sexual tension. Very nice work 10/10 |
| 2007-02-01 15:36:17 |
Todd and Cindy
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The build up of the tension was worthy of a longer story, but the sex was good when it came. Why don't we get more of the slow gentle sex like the oldies like me do? Make it last! |
| 2007-06-11 10:55:34 |
Todd and Cindy
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Nice |
| 2008-04-01 12:04:19 |
Todd and Cindy
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not bad! add some sex though but as is, the story build up is fine. a 10 for me. Hope this has a part 2... |