| 2007-02-11 22:32:11 |
Kim Possible part 1 (revised)
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Even though hermaphrodite are infertile, I'd like to hear more of this, even if that one fact is a little off. I'd like to hear what happens next... I hate cliff hangers! overall 8/10, for the one fact nad the fact that you keep the story hanging like that. |
| 2007-02-13 03:34:52 |
Kim Possible part 1 (revised)
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Ugh...this was....hard to read... I didn't even finish the whole thing. It was like reading a story written by a robot without spellcheck... >_< You really should...rewrite this if you want people to like this more. |
| 2007-02-19 10:51:02 |
Kim Possible part 1 (revised)
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dude this story was fucking awsome u should put out a part 2 as soon as possible ur rock 10/10 |
| 2007-02-19 15:20:15 |
Kim Possible part 1 (revised)
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really hard to read... please rewrite it with correct grammar and actually spell out the words... |
| 2007-02-25 00:46:34 |
Kim Possible part 1 (revised)
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Go back to shcool you dumb Fuck |