| 2004-08-24 01:23:52 |
BRIAN & THE BAD BOY
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Very good story. I can almost relate to it with a current problem of my own, though i'm currently not in the 8th grade. Very good, hardly any if any grammatical errors and the whole plot rocked. Tornado Twins was an awesome one too, one of the first ones I read. Awesome. Very good job. |
| 2004-09-27 04:08:22 |
BRIAN & THE BAD BOY
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how old are you becouse your storirs are with youth charecters none where adoults. im 15 and im going to puplish a story to u kinda inspired me but i was gonna do it anyways |
| 2004-10-14 20:22:15 |
BRIAN & THE BAD BOY
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Brilliant, I ad to stop myself shooting several times. Keep it up |
| 2004-11-07 16:44:55 |
BRIAN & THE BAD BOY
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Man that was fucking hot! |
| 2004-11-17 20:41:51 |
BRIAN & THE BAD BOY
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Good job! I liked it! |