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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-03 07:20:40 | Weekend 1 | SPELL CHECK!!!!!!!!punctuation,pr... before submitting. good concept though,just take time to do it up right before submitting. 5/10(for concept) thanx |
| 2007-02-03 21:43:55 | Weekend 1 | sounds like you just typed out the random thoughts bouncing around your head. I suppose the concept is ok, but you massacred the language during the telling. 3 / 10 |
| 2007-02-03 22:48:15 | Weekend 1 | Yea, needs lots of work on spelling and grammer, but could be good with more effort... |
| 2007-02-04 08:00:23 | Weekend 1 | from your spelling problems, you need to go to school. try one more chapter. |
| 2007-02-03 10:13:45 | To save her daddy's life -part 2 | So very well written, like the first. I hope you plan on continueing the story. |