| 2007-02-05 22:12:26 |
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your writing reads like the first draft of a screenplay. do you have any respect for your audience at all? It doesn't seem like it from your writing, or any of your responses. Even the 20 minutes or so it took me to read several of these chapters feels like a total waste. you really have no talent for this, and should consider improving your skill before you fling any more of this into the public like a monkey flings poo. |
| 2007-02-06 03:33:17 |
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I am still puzzled by your story, intrigued by where you are leading, disappointed by lack of sex so far, and anxious for the next chapter. So much of what you write seems strange, yet filled with truth. |
| 2007-02-06 22:00:28 |
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ha ha haaaaaa HA HA HA HA HA hahahahahaaa! |
| 2007-02-07 12:49:21 |
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I think your stuff is really good. Can't wait to read more! |
| 2007-02-08 04:49:29 |
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Thank you. Thinking outside the box, allowing discomfort, leads to finding truth beyond the obvious. |