| 2007-02-05 09:30:55 |
Betty_(1)
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wow. just....wow. are you sure that was your first time writing? i came so hard i nearly fell out of my chair! keep it up. hell make this story into a series! 10/10!!! |
| 2007-02-05 13:13:34 |
Betty_(1)
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Thanks very much for the positive feedback. I have another story almost finished that will be posted under the title Katy. |
| 2007-02-05 13:18:28 |
Betty_(1)
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Very erotic story, well written with lots of hot action. Actually gave me an erection, as few stories here ever do. |
| 2007-02-05 13:50:33 |
Betty_(1)
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short,brief n consince dat was what all in needed n here it is.it looks real with real feeling hot sceens.thank u very much n keep it up.write more.it'r de best story i had ever read.thnx once again.10/10 |
| 2007-02-05 14:06:47 |
Betty_(1)
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Love the feedback. I'm finishing up "Katy" right now. |