| 2007-02-15 00:06:13 |
fucking my sister pt1
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wow i hate you. y did i even read this shit |
| 2007-02-15 05:25:18 |
fucking my sister pt1
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That was simply awful. It goes to show how someone is willing to waste our time when he/she should be training to become a bus driver. This "story writer" (and I'm being very charitable here) couldn't write a decent grocery list. much less an erotic tale. get the fuck off this site, you fucking waste of time. |
| 2007-02-15 16:34:27 |
fucking my sister pt1
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didn't even finish it. bad writing, grammer and just bad, bad and more bad |
| 2007-02-15 18:14:51 |
fucking my sister pt1
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i think he used 3 periods in the whole story... oh, and thanks for making me waste 2 minutes of my life! i could have spent them reading jmillers stories... jerk! |
| 2007-02-16 17:12:26 |
fucking my sister pt1
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I am 12 years old, and even I could write better than that. That was terrible, and learn to punctuate! |