| 2007-10-20 02:16:45 |
fucking my sister pt1
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What in the world was that? A baby learning how to talk? 2/10 |
| 2007-10-21 20:27:02 |
fucking my sister pt1
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Fucking shit eating bastard, learn how to write stories you stupid mother fucker!! is this what American's teach you in school? |
| 2007-10-26 04:57:57 |
fucking my sister pt1
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kiss my ass bitch.... u write lyk an 3 yrs old |
| 2007-10-27 06:47:23 |
fucking my sister pt1
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Your story was on the right track. You just need to get into the habit of using paragraphs and refine your spelling. Dont give up and ignore the bad comments. |
| 2007-10-29 00:11:41 |
fucking my sister pt1
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wow retard read 5 lines & gave up 1/10 |