| 2007-11-28 18:45:23 |
THE CHEERLEADER_(1)
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... uh... no I'm sorry... I really didn't like this one... it was awful and horribly written... and go back to grammar school PLEASE! |
| 2007-12-01 11:13:39 |
THE CHEERLEADER_(1)
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more detail and a longer story would have made this storry beter. 5/10 |
| 2008-02-24 09:44:15 |
THE CHEERLEADER_(1)
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Beyond shitty. Go back to grammar school noob |
| 2007-02-07 08:07:11 |
Ship Wrecked
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good story |
| 2007-02-07 08:33:34 |
Ship Wrecked
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Good concept, but there is thing on your computer called a spell checker! |