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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-20 13:54:10 | Caught Wet Handed Chapter 1 | There's a saying among gamers on forum sites like this: "Wall of text crits you for 8000. You die." Other than your seemingly obvious problem with grammar and proofreading, all in all a good story. |
| 2007-10-28 21:26:25 | Caught Wet Handed Chapter 1 | Nice, 9/10. Would be 10/10 but you had some horrible grammar problems that made me have to stop and think what you meant. |
| 2007-11-02 22:35:52 | Caught Wet Handed Chapter 1 | 2222! |
| 2007-11-05 13:18:30 | Caught Wet Handed Chapter 1 | Could have been a great story had it not been for the bad spelling and grammar. Made it very hard to stay interested. Here's a tip. Read your story a few times before submitting it. I think you'll see the mistakes yourself. Been around a bit. But I've yet to meet a girl who could hose me down like this one. But I live in hope |
| 2007-11-09 02:30:17 | Caught Wet Handed Chapter 1 | fuuuuuucking hell i nearly came just reading that! |