| 2007-02-08 15:15:17 |
I love to fuck my mom
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grammer very poor story not much better sorry |
| 2007-02-08 15:26:06 |
I love to fuck my mom
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only gave you a 4 because way too hard to read and stay interested. couldn't finish it. try it again and use better grammer or get someone to help you. |
| 2007-02-08 21:06:42 |
I love to fuck my mom
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dude if u wanna write learn to speak english without the freaky indian accent |
| 2007-02-08 22:03:46 |
I love to fuck my mom
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absolute rubbish |
| 2007-02-09 06:50:07 |
I love to fuck my mom
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try writing it cleanly wthout gramtical mistakes ok punk |