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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-11 04:47:33 | MOTHER AND SON_(1) | Lol dude firstly it says that she shoves the dildo in her ass and with not lube cause she likes the pain Then when he fucks her ass it says... this was the first time she had been taken anally :S man read yur work yurself before yu post it plz Tks |
| 2007-02-11 08:54:00 | MOTHER AND SON_(1) | good practice run.now you know what problems to look out for. 7/10 good short story Thanx |
| 2007-02-11 10:43:41 | MOTHER AND SON_(1) | you are not a writer. |
| 2007-02-12 05:53:29 | MOTHER AND SON_(1) | it could last a little longer |
| 2007-02-12 06:28:51 | MOTHER AND SON_(1) | Poorly written. No style. No sensuous expectations. The story line could be turned into a red-hot sexual happening, but you're not the writer to do it. |