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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-14 20:32:28 | Morning Surprise Part6 | Ryan, thank you for this series of stories. Great plot, continuity and development. 10/10 for each. I would love to see more from you. Thank you. |
| 2007-02-14 23:35:00 | Morning Surprise Part6 | Hey there. Just finished reading all six of these stories. They were nice, but definetely not the best. The person that posted right before me noted on your continuity. I would have to disagree. Your continuity was one of the many things I didn't like. In so many places you mixed up names and forgot things that happened before. Please just take note of everything that happens and where everyone is at all times. They were good stories, but could use some work in grammar and detail. Please keep it up and improve your skills to their full potential! |
| 2007-02-15 15:35:24 | Morning Surprise Part6 | Authors note I have enjoyed writing the series and thank you for your votes and comments. I am writing the next series called The Computer man. Thank you |
| 2007-02-16 00:24:13 | Morning Surprise Part6 | The stories were great = ) however, I do want to point out that if the guy was paralized from the neck down, he could not have moved his hand...but other than that, awesome, congrats |
| 2007-02-18 14:48:39 | Morning Surprise Part6 | loved the ending came around well good job thanks |