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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-02-23 06:12:52 | A favor for her mom | As someone else wrote, the story was red-hot and very sensuous until the ass fucking and ass-sticky dicky-licking began. How absolutely disgusting, not to mention unhealthy. Stop already with the ass fucking. It's not right, for Christ's sake. |
2007-02-23 11:48:27 | A favor for her mom | This isn't even a fucking story lol! If this was an english assignment (which in no way it would be... but if it was) it would definatly get a grade E! (FAILURE!). Learn how to describe, learn where and when to use direct and indirect speech, hell you didn't even use any direct speech, their wasn't any conversation between them. Also come up with your own fucking ideas for how to seduce someone! This idea is taken from an incest story on Literotica. They went dancing at some place for like 4 lines... jesus christ you've got great detail their... I thought you would do good description when it came to the sex... that was so boring and crap! After 2 lines she came after he did oral on her. This seems like its written by someone in year 8 (Grade 9 for USA and CAN). |
2007-02-24 01:18:17 | A favor for her mom | wow yo this guy is fucking crazy lol atleast he got sum |
2007-02-24 22:48:23 | A favor for her mom | I Liked All Of Your Stories. My Favorite Was The Fivesome With You, Paul, Kim, Sara, And Rick. |
2007-03-05 09:52:34 | A favor for her mom | You might as well eat a bowl of shit!!!...you dumb nasty bitch!!! |