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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-16 06:52:53 | Nothing better than love | Terrible spelling; lousy grammar; poor story telling ability. It all adds up to being a fucked-up effort. 2/10. |
| 2007-02-16 21:17:24 | Nothing better than love | your a fucking douche, its an ok astory and all, but you have a sick fucking mind man... you need help it would make a great horror-romance movie, but for christs sake man! get some help... |
| 2007-02-16 21:31:34 | Nothing better than love | more plz and don't ;isten to the haters they are just hating because they can't do nothing like this |
| 2007-02-17 01:36:06 | Nothing better than love | There is such a thing as a spell checker...USE IT!!! Everything sounded good until the Chase character ended up being a sadistic rapist and killer. You need to kill him off and let her find her mother. |
| 2007-02-17 04:33:43 | Nothing better than love | Definatley needs a conclusion. Kill the rapist and maybe find some string of a clue to her mother. Grammar could use a little work though. 6.5/10 |