| 2007-08-04 01:47:24 |
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It doesnt matter what other people think i enjoyed it and that is why its posted some people need to get their heads out of the sand and imagine themselves as one of the charactors keep writing |
| 2007-10-07 16:00:30 |
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that was a really hott story! great job I lke for once that its' a bisexual guy and not just the girls. Keep writing! |
| 2007-10-18 17:29:07 |
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sorry but it did sorta suck |
| 2007-10-25 01:14:23 |
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It could have used a bit more detail. Like visuals were good but it lacked texture and smells....what noises were there. how did the bark feel under your feet as your gripped it with them while she sucked you? Visuals are nice but you lack the other four senses....sex is a SENSual act for a reason |
| 2007-11-22 19:13:53 |
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shite |