| 2007-03-12 22:48:35 |
A Ghostly Haunting-Chapter Seven
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damn i'm fucking prophetic! though you killed her off before she realized the truth, so she still died an idiot, but at least a bitch who gets off on blaming innocent people for shit didn't get a chance to hurt someone else |
| 2007-03-17 14:39:28 |
A Ghostly Haunting-Chapter Seven
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I had my money on strangling as her death. Crashed car/ glass to neck,not bad indeed. |
| 2007-04-11 15:19:09 |
A Ghostly Haunting-Chapter Seven
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FINALLY she dies that asshole deserved it |
| 2007-04-17 20:44:17 |
A Ghostly Haunting-Chapter Seven
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Detective Lawrence is a regular Umbridge. (aka Professor Umbridge from Harry Potter.) |
| 2007-02-22 21:10:09 |
Gymnasium Nightmare-Revised
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The rape story is good - the paragraphs help the readability. If you wish to further improve it, it might be an idea to use a spellchecker, as some words are incorrect. These do not detract too much, but, were they to be rectified, would ameliorate the overall result. Well done, though. It got me wet! |