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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-06 20:20:44 | Girls best friend | good story but it could be better...maybe try to be more detailed about the process of Rascal entering her and the sex. I'm not trying to be mean.....just helpful. |
| 2007-02-23 04:51:13 | Brothers Slave | good story, nice characters. but u should do more paragraphs... its much easier to read |
| 2007-02-23 06:30:23 | Brothers Slave | great idea, can't wait to see how this series pans out. split your paragraphs a little though, good job! 9/10 |
| 2007-02-23 06:50:08 | Brothers Slave | please proofread stories before sending them.don't repeat yourself so much. otherwise good story and concept.hope you and your brothers have many more adventures togather. 8/10 thanx |
| 2007-02-23 07:51:54 | Brothers Slave | if you are a slut like you said let me come over and fuck you and fill your little pussy up with cum. more please 10/10 |