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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-05 00:10:18 | Kim possible part two | No offense man, but use some quotations. for example: "I'm going to fuck your ass so hard you're going to cry," Bonnie said. Kim gulped down some air as they walked into her room, "Now get undressed bitch and lay on your stomach." Just a pointer to get better ratings, it makes everything easier to understand as well. Good luck! |
| 2007-03-10 12:30:19 | Kim possible part two | more |
| 2007-03-12 23:31:51 | Kim possible part two | that sucked it didnt make sense and learn grammar |
| 2007-03-17 00:23:24 | Kim possible part two | Can you at least restuructre the stroy so that it is more readable.... still nice dude :D !! |
| 2007-03-21 23:12:49 | Kim possible part two | Bring on # 3 |