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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-26 09:03:46 | Step-daddy | Ok, I normaly don't like to complain about things like punctuation, paragraphs, spelling, ect, but... Well, there were times when I had to highlight the line I was on, just so I wouldn't lose my place when I scrolled down. And the bold text isn't so bad, but without paragraphs, everything just sort of runs together. All in all, the story was pretty good, so I'm rating it 7/10. /| MidnightFiend /| |
| 2007-02-27 11:33:47 | Step-daddy | great story./ |
| 2007-03-06 22:52:36 | Step-daddy | It's called grammar I refuse to read stories that don't have it |
| 2007-03-07 16:49:10 | Step-daddy | Damn that is hard as hell to read, sorry didn't mean for it to be so fucked up. But hey I finally learned how to make paragraphs. Took me long enough so if I decide to write more at least they'll be readable. |
| 2007-05-10 03:16:28 | Step-daddy | Ech! |