| 2007-02-25 20:46:30 |
Teen titans 3
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NO stop writing immediatly i gave you 2 chances to make it better and yet you jsut add more crap to it this is disgusting so just stop NOW |
| 2007-02-25 21:44:56 |
Teen titans 3
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why the fuck do you even bother? Your stories are some of the worst rated on this site. You suck. Change something! Awful. 2/10. |
| 2007-02-27 05:30:21 |
Teen titans 3
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you need to learn to write better |
| 2007-02-27 22:31:33 |
Teen titans 3
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Why do you even think about this messed up shit. i mean, youre taking a kids tv show and turning it into porn. i mean, you make slaves and shemales? ur fucked up man. thats really sick |
| 2007-03-03 23:05:48 |
Teen titans 3
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The ideas are interesting but work on your grammar and get you dialogue in order |