| 2007-02-27 18:20:59 |
dominating my big sister
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learn to fucking spell |
| 2007-02-27 22:53:46 |
dominating my big sister
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continue on with the story man...really good...:D |
| 2007-02-27 23:55:24 |
dominating my big sister
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AWESOME! KEEPWRITING! |
| 2007-02-28 00:48:19 |
dominating my big sister
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holy shit, this is horrible! your grammer is garbage and theirs absolutley no plot to your story. 2/10 |
| 2007-03-04 23:40:14 |
dominating my big sister
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this sucked, a lot you are a terrible writer and the grammar you use sounds like you're about seven years old. the story wasn't even good. |