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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-15 02:18:16 | Computer Man Pt2 | Your descriptions aren't to great. Not only do you go straight from an D to an E but you also say there is a thirty, any girl with a thirty as the width doesn't exist in real life. Numbers like 38 and 36 but not 28 and 30. I'm a young girl and i even have 36 as the number! Retard. Have you ever touched a girl before? |
| 2007-11-27 00:42:19 | Computer Man Pt2 | boobies!!! |
| 2007-02-27 18:36:26 | The Geman Sheperds | fucking retarded learn how to write a sentence that makes sense after that try another sentence maybe after a couple months try stringing said sentences into paragraphs and maybe eventually into a story that makes sense. |
| 2007-02-27 18:41:13 | The Geman Sheperds | utter crap. |
| 2007-02-27 23:43:48 | The Geman Sheperds | wow...i don't think i've ever seen so many grammatical errors all at once. besides that, it was a good story. However, the last paragraph was not only retarded, but completely unneccesary. You should have just left it out. And don't even get me started on the last sentence "So comment this story or rate this story ok talk or write stories to you guy later bye bye, talk to you late, see you later." Grrr, just reading it makes me angry!!! |