| 2007-02-28 12:19:07 |
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An awesome series... keep it coming! |
| 2007-02-28 17:21:42 |
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great job writing! I didnt see any errors keep writing! |
| 2007-02-28 19:13:59 |
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Chapter 9 is submitted and should be posted by Saturday or Sunday....I hope you guys enjoy it.
~Snoochies
P.S. Thanks for your comments and PMs. |
| 2007-02-28 21:10:10 |
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I was surprised that you succumed to public clamor despite your stand against sex with young women and your past history. Granted that the story was artfully written that the emotional and physical horror that ella endured overshadowed any possible arrousal that might have occured in that scene (except maybe for a few perverted souls).
Despite your giving in to the crowd this piece still deserves full marks, 10/10 |
| 2007-03-01 19:14:18 |
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Nice writing! I need to go back a nd read your earlier submissions. HOT! |