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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-28 22:23:20 | Sacrilege | If that only happened to me, I would love to go to church. 10/10 |
| 2007-02-28 22:37:38 | Sacrilege | truthfully it think this is one of the best stories out there. |
| 2007-03-01 00:59:59 | Sacrilege | Finally a good orgy story. Liked the bi stuff too. Keep it up! |
| 2007-03-01 08:08:26 | Sacrilege | really,really good story |
| 2007-03-01 10:09:12 | Sacrilege | good story. Just watch the grammar, spelling, and tenses. "She has the type of ass common to the black girls in the school. It was very full yet obviously tight and firm" you switch from has (present) to was (past tense) in the next sentence. It makes it hard to follow the story. But keep writing. Just re-read your story a lot. Spellcheck doesn't catch everything...like "As I lied there..." Instead of As I laid there. 7/10...get a little better witht he grammar and you'll be at 10/10s in no time. |