| 2007-03-01 22:49:26 |
I'll show you mine...Revised. Tom gets his.
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good but learn to spell , that goes for alot of stories on this site. |
| 2007-03-01 22:59:49 |
I'll show you mine...Revised. Tom gets his.
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If the spelling was really that bad, I failed to notice. A whole lot better than most other stories here. Anyone complaining is way too anal for their own good. |
| 2007-03-02 02:09:43 |
I'll show you mine...Revised. Tom gets his.
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My brother and I used to play "Show and Tell" when we were kids. I'm glad we did because it has turned into something wonderful. Loved your story. 10/10 |
| 2007-03-09 02:06:28 |
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IT WAS OK,BUT THE SPELLING WAS BAD. A LITTLE TOO MAKE-BELIEVE. OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS A 5 |
| 2007-03-22 15:41:59 |
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theres to much unbelieveable parts in it and as the one below ses to make-believe 6/10 |