| 2007-03-03 17:10:06 |
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A very well written journal keep it up i cant wait for the next instalment |
| 2007-03-03 17:26:36 |
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Sorry to say the next chapter will be a week or two. I have to go out of town (twice) and won't have much occasion to write.
My hope is to have the next chapter submitted by next Sunday. So it will hopefully be posted a week from Wednesday. |
| 2007-03-03 23:50:16 |
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Great series, i realy like the way you write. I think you should write more, but not in this particular story. My opinion is that you should end the story soon, but then again, that's just my opinion. I also like the fact that you focus on the story rather than just the sex part.
This story is one of (if not the) best i've ever read here. Keep it up |
| 2007-03-04 00:17:05 |
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good job |
| 2007-03-04 14:46:53 |
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I agree... you're doing great. he only changes I can see might be format. ie: seperation of characters speaking. You might add more background to provide texture. Otherwise, you're fine as wine in the summertime. X aka Mike |