| 2007-03-04 10:33:27 |
Naruto (revised)
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First of all, learn how to use speech marks, are you illiterate or something. Either decide if you are going to use them or if you are not. If you do another part, you will have the honour of the two worst stories on this website, so don't, go back to the day job, or learn how to write good stories, by reading the Mixed Metaphor series, written by Old Guy. -100/10 |
| 2007-03-04 21:40:00 |
Naruto (revised)
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seriously who cares, the story was readable and it was AMAZING so that guy can go to hell. Keep you the good work! |
| 2007-03-05 23:00:23 |
Naruto (revised)
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Great story man, can't wait for the next! |
| 2007-03-08 00:55:24 |
Naruto (revised)
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to answer the question you listed below, no i didnt like it and please dont continue with parts two and three, the story was bad, if i hadnt seen an episode once i wouldnt have known what you were even talking about |
| 2007-03-08 10:04:41 |
Naruto (revised)
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Please dont make another one i beg you |