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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-09 18:38:42 | Alice Deflowered 1 | It was nicely writen but a history centric person isn't large enough for a target audience. I do like the idea though, continue writing, a few more shots at it and you could really do well at this. |
| 2007-03-10 01:08:12 | Alice Deflowered 1 | If you are to continue, and I think you should, you could try being more direct to the point. story was nice and hot, but a bit long-winded with too much of a preamble. Further, I think I would enjoy reading the store norem, iuf the female were somewhat older. It is hard to picture gals still under 13 being subjected to sex and enjoying it. |
| 2007-03-10 15:20:04 | Alice Deflowered 1 | you've got the tools, a little young in my opinion, but never the less it could show promise. |
| 2007-03-11 21:17:08 | Alice Deflowered 1 | make 'em a little yunger, 9.9/10 |
| 2007-03-12 23:39:09 | Alice Deflowered 1 | the person that posted below me needs to learn to write...like comon...are you fucking retarded thats all i have to say. ps 10/10 haha |