| 2008-04-20 01:45:36 |
Overnight Sleepover
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why are you calling him a pervert when you just read the whole damn story |
| 2007-03-07 10:25:34 |
SLUTTY KIM
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it seemed kinda rushed. and there were a few spelling errors. but all and all not a bad fuck. 8/10 |
| 2007-03-07 10:30:26 |
SLUTTY KIM
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I'd love to find a young slut like Kim. I'd be in paradise. |
| 2007-03-07 11:19:03 |
SLUTTY KIM
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couple spelling errors, quite a few grammar mistakes, and why is it all in capitals? writing it in lower case makes it easier to read, just something for you to keep in mind, but yeah, not a bad first attempt, seems like the start of a good series, keep them coming! 8/10 |
| 2007-03-07 12:32:28 |
SLUTTY KIM
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