| 2007-03-10 13:33:06 |
Elves
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Interesting story, I would like to hear more. More characters, More details. |
| 2007-03-10 18:32:16 |
Elves
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yes more |
| 2007-03-11 05:32:57 |
Elves
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Pretty good, for your first one. Think well, and pick well, elves and magic are your guides. |
| 2007-03-11 10:21:39 |
Elves
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lol, i know my fantasy and I'm afraid this sounded very corny. Without the use of paragraphs which made it suck even more. Also remember it's a story on a sexual literature site so you need to focus on the intimacy of the characters. For example, what they look like, how they react to each other etc rather than the other superfluous crap. Also keep in mind your not supposed to be writing a novel. |
| 2007-03-11 10:26:09 |
Elves
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also proof read your text, a spell checker will not help you if the word is another valid word in the dictionary. |