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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-11-11 14:12:56 | His Teacher | What the fuck? Reader 11-04-07 - 23:16 Thats just disgusting. Are you that fucked up in the head? Great story. Cummed bucket loads |
| 2007-11-14 00:53:55 | His Teacher | God, please give me this teacher for chemistry |
| 2007-11-19 15:47:50 | His Teacher | i believe that your piece would be much more powerful if it was delivered in the first person. I feel it alienates the reader when graphical stuff like this is in the third Elongating the O's creates the wrong tone for this piece, even if they are screaming. you want them short and snappy, like a command Very good idea, i like the piece of writing the main caharacter writes. it sets the tone perfect for the later parts |
| 2007-11-26 16:16:59 | His Teacher | wanna trade that teach for muh science one? XD |
| 2007-12-06 17:22:54 | His Teacher | FUCK YA!!!! PLEASE GIMME THE TEACHERS NO. I WANT 2 TAKE SOME PRIVATE TUTION'S FROM HER!!!!!!!!;-) |