| 2007-03-18 14:53:18 |
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Very nice, WW2 was a new story thought, good first part, I'm sure there must be at least a part 2 coming |
| 2007-03-19 11:46:33 |
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god love those cock hungry Dutch sluts |
| 2007-03-18 06:12:11 |
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I find it strange that you call it a 'poem' - just laying out like that does not make it one.
I liked it though. |
| 2007-03-18 21:53:12 |
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Actually, I did not call it a poem. It was logged in as a work of fiction. That is strange. Glad you liked it tho |
| 2007-04-02 06:16:49 |
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It was an okay story. Nothing to get excited over. |