| 2007-03-23 10:51:45 |
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the last f-wit would not know a good story if it bite him on the leg! keep up the good work ... ! :)
bc. |
| 2007-03-24 00:00:00 |
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Fantastic Story. Well written and has enough sensuality to get hard and interested right from the start. Write more please. |
| 2007-03-24 00:52:56 |
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A good story well told. Ignore Reader 03-23-07 and keep writing. |
| 2007-03-24 21:02:14 |
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Dear junkfree - try the author index on the story site - many more tales by PP in a variety of themes, including romance.
To other commentators - I'm glad you liked my story - I took a lot of time over it. |
| 2007-04-01 23:06:39 |
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You ruined the story by using 'like' too many times. You're trying to use it as if some teenage girl was talking, but you're narrating a story. Edit it and it might be enjoyable. |