| 2007-03-25 17:23:46 |
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wow. part 2? |
| 2007-03-25 18:42:36 |
Fertile Valley
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hopefully you can end it properly, it was left unfinished. |
| 2007-03-27 15:49:55 |
Fertile Valley
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Stop having twins one at atime lot more fucking |
| 2007-04-16 14:53:01 |
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its the water. i figured that out early the two girls drank the bottled water in the country store. next day, their breasts r growing, while the 2 older girls { who didnt drink the water } breasts arent. now dad done drank the water and his dick is growing bigger than ever, as he said in the end of this chapter. awesome storyline. i love it. 10/10 |
| 2007-04-16 16:33:14 |
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you really should use caps where needed. like beginning of sentences, I not i, and when describing places such as Fertile Valley. makes the story hard to read and also makes us readers think u might only have a 5th grade education, if that high. |