| 2007-08-20 01:52:54 |
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all i can say is DAMN!! |
| 2007-08-23 01:12:37 |
First Time Driving Part4
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Best of the Series . Keep Writing! |
| 2007-08-26 04:03:08 |
First Time Driving Part4
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good story, but wouldn't jackie be wondering who juliana is and who he really loves? perhaps some rivalry later? |
| 2007-12-02 00:40:15 |
First Time Driving Part4
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parts 1-3 were good and i love the girl on girl action but i swear that this story could never happen in real life julianna would have ran away or killed jackie for stealing the man she loves so that kinda ruins the story for me mybe you could fix this in part 5 and also if jackie was a virgin wouldnt she be more hesitant to suck a guy off she's been with for 5minutes and then have a threesome with him after about 10minutes? |
| 2007-12-29 03:39:24 |
First Time Driving Part4
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nothin bout drivin |