| 2008-01-08 08:32:07 |
Abucted Cheerleaders
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You have the nerve to tell other people bad things about their stories, Yet you should learn to write first before you give bad reviews. Your story isn't the greatest either. |
| 2007-03-27 13:20:49 |
the one I met on the internet part 3
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Linda: Interesting ideas but I see why you say you are not totally satisfied. I cannot define why it is not as good as the earlier ones, but it could be reworked. I will think this through and see if I can get some ideas. Deacon Brodie |
| 2007-03-31 12:37:57 |
the one I met on the internet part 3
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More please ur stories are sooooo hot |
| 2007-04-08 13:57:11 |
the one I met on the internet part 3
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sucks |
| 2007-05-14 22:47:58 |
the one I met on the internet part 3
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I'm on this site through my PSP. Talk about a sex machine! |