| 2005-05-22 13:36:39 |
Japan's Girls Gymnastics Team Pt 1
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good one but try to put more pain |
| 2005-06-22 20:50:43 |
Japan's Girls Gymnastics Team Pt 1
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Not to bad for the 1st chapter, keep on writing. |
| 2006-07-04 18:13:04 |
Japan's Girls Gymnastics Team Pt 1
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Great story. |
| 2004-03-05 03:05:57 |
Japan's Girls Gymnastics Team Pt 2
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Nice storyline. Woiuld be hotter if noin-essential commentary eliiminated in favor of descriptions of tits, clits, asses, etc. to rev up the heat, plus how the pussies smelled and tasted. Which gal had the most cunt syrup? Don't forget this is a fuckstory, not a literary novella. |
| 2004-12-31 01:51:10 |
Japan's Girls Gymnastics Team Pt 2
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It was fine to me...i actually prefer this kind of stories more. I thot it was great how everything was still kind of ..innocent? rather than constant carnal sex and lust. |