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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-24 00:38:35 | Two Naughty Little Angels | i understand you re 24 role playing the little girl but please make sure you review your writing before you post it, somethings just dont make sense; and if you want people ti stop leaving negative comments and low rating fix them and explain what your reasing is in a simpler way, i had to read al your stories twice to make any sense of them all. |
| 2007-04-26 09:43:32 | Two Naughty Little Angels | that was HOT i love u!! and ur storys!!! |
| 2007-08-18 16:19:50 | Two Naughty Little Angels | lots of flaws in that story, if your acting as a child the descriptions should be more naive. . |
| 2007-04-01 11:30:28 | My Lady Vampire | hey not bad that was pretty gd, more please you seem to know abit about vapires but look a little closer they arnt quite like that. |
| 2007-04-05 06:08:06 | My Lady Vampire | "Her busy was now very sensitive." Her busy? Did you mean to say "pussy?" Write shorter paragraphs, but overall it wasn't bad. |