| 2007-08-08 19:44:41 |
The Cherry Popper Chaoter 1
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I'm sorry everyone but after those last two comments I just have to say something here. Not only were they anonymous they were totally useless. I don't mind if someone doesn't like my stories, as an avid reader there are plenty of authors I don't like and won't read so if someone doesn't like my writing I don't have a problem with that. What I have a problem with is people who say they don't like something but don't give a reason. If someone's going to object to my writing it would be nice if they had the decency to tell me why they don't like it so I know if it's something I need to work on, or just a personal objection. Comments like the last two are just farts in the air, and just as objectionable. |
| 2007-11-14 13:00:15 |
The Cherry Popper Chaoter 1
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I liked the way you started off this story.. It was very playful and fun... not to mention very arousing. |
| 2008-02-24 22:13:09 |
The Cherry Popper Chaoter 1
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shot my load all over my desk |
| 2007-04-01 02:52:25 |
Diana_(3)
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long wonded sucker now aren;ttt youuuu. I'll take a piece if that please. next |
| 2007-04-01 15:18:38 |
Young Girls_(0)
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Great story you wonderful perv. I especially liked the statement that you ate her virgin pussy and it wasn't your last. I ate a few too and would again. Ten! Tex |