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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-29 16:06:06 | my best friend_(12) | good story,well written,but whats with switching names through-out the story?pet names,real names? you never really explained the changes. 8/10 thanx |
| 2007-03-29 18:08:38 | my best friend_(12) | A fantastic first effort. Please refer to the other intelligent comments regarding the girls' name. I agree with my friend Old Guy when he makes his "how to do it sex" comment and his remark about 'fleshing out' the characters. (Truth to tell, I was guilty of that same thing in my first work) Overall, very steamy and sexy. Keep it up! |
| 2007-03-29 18:16:42 | my best friend_(12) | my eyes started to bleed after reading that bullshit |
| 2007-03-29 21:53:53 | my best friend_(12) | sorry guys there was a mix up in the name at the time i was writing this i was watching tv with my friend witch happened to be Inuyasha and when i heard the name i acidentally put the name Kagome in. so sorry |
| 2007-03-30 05:53:09 | my best friend_(12) | not bad keep wrighting |