| 2007-04-08 05:42:15 |
My first affair with my brother
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i agree stories are most effective when they are filled with grammer and words so powerful they bring you into the depth of the story. they wring out the most woderful satisfaction...this was a mere 3/10. there was no real description or anything special to it...just cut straight to the point. a poor effort. |
| 2007-04-08 08:42:16 |
My first affair with my brother
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darn good story |
| 2007-04-08 13:12:16 |
My first affair with my brother
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good stuff |
| 2007-04-09 18:47:06 |
My first affair with my brother
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wish i had a sister let alone a sister like you to have sex with |
| 2007-04-10 03:34:00 |
My first affair with my brother
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not bad |