| 2007-04-03 15:03:32 |
Fucking My Siter Beth
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Could have been a great story... the only realistic sex paragraph was the last one though. I'm afraid that any girl who has their hymen broken by cruel force will not orgasm because it hurts and leaves you red raw till it heals! Imagine your penis slashed and do you think you'd climax? *wink* It is possible to write a virginity story that doesn't involve a forced hymen-breaking ceremony followed by orgasm. |
| 2007-04-03 15:57:12 |
Fucking My Siter Beth
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I ran outta room in my comment. Please don't think the story wasn't good! Your descriptive writing is extremely well crafted. Do continue to write, we would love to hear more work from you. |
| 2007-04-03 17:37:54 |
Fucking My Siter Beth
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awesome! |
| 2007-04-03 18:05:47 |
Fucking My Siter Beth
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Not bad. I liked the story but as others have said...SPELL CHECK. |
| 2007-04-03 18:26:14 |
Fucking My Siter Beth
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more!! |