| 2007-04-11 16:30:19 |
Cody and I
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:O awesome as hell.... but u should work on spelling a little other then that awesome! 10/10 |
| 2007-04-29 19:30:27 |
Cody and I
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Work on your spelling and your making your stories more in depth. I didn't get turned out at all from that. |
| 2007-05-17 17:59:56 |
Cody and I
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a little hint for ure english. after something wiyh a plural { god only knows what kind of drugS was going around } use were, not was. otherwise it was hot, especially at the end when cody called him by name and said " im not done with you ". sounds like max is about to get fucked. |
| 2007-04-06 06:40:33 |
No.1 Cousin
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Bad. Did you send this in on a cell phone? Use real words. |
| 2007-04-06 10:08:23 |
No.1 Cousin
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peace of fucking shit |