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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-03 18:29:21 | Seperation Ends | great story, was nice to hae some passion as opposed to pure fucking. top job! |
| 2007-04-03 19:08:58 | Seperation Ends | No offense but you miss-spelled the title...not a very good way to start out. Good story though. SEPARATION ENDS |
| 2007-04-03 20:02:48 | Seperation Ends | Very good story, could use a little more detail though. |
| 2007-04-14 05:20:49 | Seperation Ends | Nice work dude. Packed with emotion and raw without being gratuitously hardcore. One small criticism however would be that the occassional spelling errors, such as witch instead of which, kinda distract the reader from the erotic nature of the story and as such kinda destroys the mood you were managing to beuild until that point, but its an easy mistake to make. :D Overall brilliant. - its scary how it reminds me of how i feel with my GF, like a carbon copy almost!!! 8/10 keep it up dude! |
| 2007-06-11 16:43:14 | Seperation Ends | Decent |