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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-05 01:44:37 | Sister Catches Brother | reader below me, it's GRAMMAR not GRAMMER. Learn to spell biotch. The story was lame by the way. |
| 2007-04-05 01:49:37 | Sister Catches Brother | Despite what everyone else is saying, I think your ingenuity needs to be commended. You tried something new, and it didn't work 100%, but the idea is solid. Try retooling this, then repost it, smooth it out, work on some spelling and grammar, I think the dialogue could also be smoothed outsomehow, maybe a little more back and forth, or something instead of the solid blocks. Give it another shot. Don't let these guys discourage ya. I gave you a 10/10 for effort |
| 2007-04-05 10:35:27 | Sister Catches Brother | Cute, but needs some work. Reader that called it 'grammer'.. you got owned, 'cause you can't spell the word grammar. Nerdnessssssssss. |
| 2007-04-05 21:13:21 | Sister Catches Brother | You need to keep Jesus Christ out of your stories. |
| 2007-04-06 00:33:11 | Sister Catches Brother | on a scale of 1 to 10 i give this a --10 |