| 2007-04-07 06:18:39 |
A Score to Settle
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very well written, could have used more of a climax. it was nice to have correct dialogue. enjoyed the story very much |
| 2007-04-07 06:58:42 |
A Score to Settle
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Superb you cannot leave it like this though go for it 10/10 |
| 2007-04-07 11:05:48 |
A Score to Settle
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fucking shit that was amazing. Make a sequel!! |
| 2007-04-07 11:20:55 |
A Score to Settle
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out of all the stories i have read this one beats them all. i mean i was lusting during the period of them lusting. it needs a part 2 and 3 |
| 2007-04-07 14:50:26 |
A Score to Settle
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very well written story..... verrrry hhhhot |